My dog died on tuesday, I wrote a poem... what do you think?

hi nicole that was a really beautiful poem to have your dog bean meant the world to you from reading your poem and you must be hurting at the moment take courage from the fact you did everything you could for your dog bean until there was nothing else you could have done if all owners of dogs showed the same love and compassion for there dogs as you did for bean this world would be a better place because of it i lost my beautiful st bernard georgie last year he was only a year old when he was killed on me it seriously broke my heart my grandad said to me the best place to bury a dog is in there masters heart and that is where my georgie is and will always be in my heart and that's where bean is in your heart and always will be plus im sure you will have beautiful memories of bean i hope you will be ok