How good is this hard rock song I wrote?

I'll give you a 10 out of 10. I love your lyrics! And I have to disagree with the guy above me. Just because what your writing about is common in rock doesn't mean you have to change the subject. Write whatever you feel is important to you.Alot of rap talks about gangs and crime. Does that mean that you shouldn't write a rap song about crime?. Anyways, I think your lyrics are very creative and the rhyming fits together very well. I hope you will get famous one day so I can get a first row seat to your concert!